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Madahgi Sunrise, Part 2

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This is Madahgi Sunrise updated. I took a lot of the comments made from this site and other sites and combined them with comments friends and others have made. The end result of the positives and the negatives now reside in the pic posted here. I have received a lot of good advice and have acted on quite a bit of it. Some advice that was given to me, though understood, has not led to alterations. There is just something in me that likes the image too much to make all the suggested changes.

This time when I went back I also did a little bit of tweaking and changing while making the requested adjustments. I think the overall result is a better image. You can compare this image with the original: [link]

The elves were done up in Poser Pro and imported into Vue 7 PS. The editing was handled in PS. Comments are welcome.
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Interesting.Since the light coming from the setting sun is so bright you should have light reflected back on to the figures which would give them prominence and much more of a three dimensional feel. Bring some of that background colour into the foreground. Right now the elements are not well integrated which makes the painting look like a collage.Your composition is good - colours are nice. Keep working you, have the talent.